I have a very nasty feeling this is about me. Otherwise, very emotive, and if given to the person it is about, would not doubt break their heart and highlight their stupidity. I assume that is one of thos goals - achieved.

The two voices or parts work well together, supplementing the other's thoughts, and hinting at a kind of madness.

...i know exactly how this feels...

i love reading poems like this. its really 'real'. i also love the way u set this out! it would make a good song :) i will b bk soon afta reading sum more of ur writing!

-cindie
p.s. plz cud u r+r some of my stuff if u hav time?

This was a fun read, although I can understand it wasn't all that fun to write. It's as if you're trying to move on all the time, but you just keep going back to that one fact, the counting of the minutes, the time passing by. Awesome what you did.

This is a good poem - I can relate. Thanks for all the reviews,love, The Soppy Hobbit

I liked that. 'Those who anger you conquer you'. Lots of meaning.