I love this story! You're prose is a dream to read - it's descriptive, but not ridiculously so, and your grammar is perfect! I really love the plot of this story, and I'm already completely enamoured by Ritsui, Chiyoda, and Kenichi! I desperately want to find out what Kenichi's invention is and why Chiyoda took the microchip. I know this is probably just a waste of time, because you haven't updated in years, but I wish you would continue this story!

lol...omg...LOOL

please continue. it's really good.
yami

i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon

This fic is awsome! I love it so much!! Please update soon though! I can' twait to know what happens! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Gah!...are you ever going to update this? Please Please?? Pretty Please?

Gah! Update, update! Wai! This reminds me a little of a manga scanslation I read, I can't wait for you to write more...

i really like this story...i was afraid to read it cause it hasn't been updated in a really long time. i'm glad i did, but i hope you will update soon...please? (*shameless begging*)

O_O; hehe...
that was amusing. ^_^
please update it!!

More! More! I adored this story, more please. ^__^

HAHAHAH! This is too funny. Poor Ritsu-kun. HAHA anyways. Keep writing.

I wouldn't mind lemon, as long as the story still makes sense... story is always more important!

This is great! can't wait to read more! update soon!

~ kyoko

WOW @_@ Very innteresting!! MORE! WRITE MOREE! * kicks and screams like a 6 yr old* Gah! What happens next? UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Hehe. It's getting better! Please, could you put some more mush in the next one? I LIVE for fluff! ^_^

~Sindu~

omg... CONTINUE SOON! PLZ I BEG OF YOU!