Really Good.

o i freakin love this story! i wanna see a part 3! :) so please write one! wait did you? must go check, anyways i wanted to tell you that i love your writing! no kidding! ^^

Cool ending. Somehow you managed to get Spencer to survive so many gunshot wounds he cant be much use for anything more than a fishing net or something, but I like that in a story!!

As for your cast, I think its perfect. Anything with Angelina Jolie in it is bound to be wonderful, and she's not only beautiful enough she's also tough enough for the part! Excellent plan of action!

Okay, I have to run off now. Great work as always.

Spawny

Great story! I like the way you ended this. Amazing! The cast is just perfect. Please write more stories.

oh wow, i never expected that kind of an ending. congratulations! lol. awesome job!

i like your cast, too. Stephen Dorff would be a great Jerry, Antonio Banderas a scary/hot Benny, and Johnny Depp an amazing Spencer! I can't remember what Mark Wahlberg looks like at the moment, but i seriously hAte Angelina Jolie. =| how about Lisa Marie Presley? LOL. i know she's not an actress but she looks the part...

um... yeah. thanks for the story! it was a pleasure to read!

|diSasteRAngL|

OMG, I COULD KISS YOU! LIKE HONEST TO GOD KISS YOU! BUT I WON'T B/C I'D FREAK YOU OUT, PROBABLY ALOT. BUT THAT'S OKAY, BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T KILL SPENCER! *Squeals*! *Does a happy dance* - okay, honest i'm done spazzing out, seriously! *breathes for the first time in minutes* okay, i'm good, excellent story, and YES YOU NEED A THIRD PART! Duh! LoL! Hope to see it soon and make more stories!

Gah, *KEELS OVER AND DIES* YOU CAN'T KILL SPENCER...*SOBS HYSTERICALLY* MAKE HIM COME BACK
please, and if you can't manage that, damnit all, JASON AND AIDEN ARE SO GETTING TOGETHER! Haha, i love this story! UPDATE!

I like this chapter. Even though it means that Spencer or Will or whatever the hell he's really called is dead after all.

I guess now she's going to end up with his brother or something.

I dunno, I'm probably missing something somewhere, but I always was a bit dumb like that!

Anyway, great stuff as always...

Spawny

Then again, maybe not. Yup, he's dead. At least things are less complicated now. This chapter moved a little too fast for me. Good thing! Please update.

I think Spencer is going to live. He promised. Please update.

What made you think this was a bad chapter?

Okay, the end was pretty bad, but I´m getting used to your cliffhangers now. So I guess Spencer isn´t really dead.

He better not be anyway!

Okay, so I´m actually on holiday, but I had no option but to find somewhere I could read this when I found out you´d updated.

And I´m glad I did, and as always am looking forward to the grand finale!!

Spawny

really, stop putting spencer in near-death situations!! it's terrible for the reader, and aiden's probably gonna have a heart attack soon! =]

|diSasteRAngL|

OMG NO, STOP WITH THE KILLING SPENCER!! LOL, HE'S TOO HOT TO DIE! KEEP WRITING! I LOVE THIS STORY!

benny's dEAD?? really? i thought he'd be more prepared against aiden... lol. please update soon!

|disasterangl|

awesome chapter! benny's awful, though... has a sick mind and an evil heart. the part with jerry was interesting! very cool... is he still gonna stick around with spencer even after death? lol. update soon!

|disasterangl|