Very short, but i like it... i hate war so much... it makes no sense that we must fight for peace...

Hey, I really like this poem. The imagery you create in it is very vivid and real.

Oh, this one I love. Profound, mournfully beautiful. The rhyming and cadence are wonderful attributes. Nice job.

Short, yet very effective.


~Heart of the Sword

It was pretty good. It was way to short though I suggest that you make it much longer. I don't see why you put it in the war category though. Maybe I'll see it in the next chapters. Are there next chapters?

Whyette

LIIkes yes! very good!

this is really nice its got meaning the only thing i think is that its a little short, 2 or 3 more couplets and it wouldvve been perfect ;)