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| ForeverWasteAway 2008-07-15 ch 15,  | abuseaww, this story should have more reviews. Tis quite awesome. I'm putting it on my alert list even though it's on hiatus. Hopefully you'll update soonish. xo. |
| Writing4Eternity 2006-08-30 ch 15, | abuseAw Cute!! |
| Pink5288 2006-07-21 ch 15, | abusePLEASE CONTINUE!! |
| chevy-luv 2005-10-02 ch 15, | abusewow! intense ending there... update soon :D loving the story i might add! |
| BlackFireyPhoenix86 2005-09-16 ch 15, | abuseVery good story.. I love the drama in this story... And I love the drama that comes with Carmen and Tristain.. Very Very good story.. Keep up the good work.. |
| MolestAPeanut 2005-06-24 ch 15, | abuseGood chapter, good story :) I really like this. It's different, and it's not really a fairy tale. It's very good. Please update soon. ~S.Buh Bai. |
| MolestAPeanut 2005-06-24 ch 4, | abuseHe just walks up to her and kisses her?? Weird... lol okay on to read the next chapter.. |
| MolestAPeanut 2005-06-24 ch 2, | abuseDo you really think she'd be saying "**" and "**" in front of her police man dad? just wondering... :) |
| mats girl 2005-06-23 ch 15, anon. | abusei almost forgot about this story! glad you updated; been far too long.if my dad told me who to date; i'd tell him where to go! probably why he doesnt know i have a serious boyfriend...anyways; i love this story! i wonder if tristan will stay drug free... |
| iM a PoLiSh BlOnDe 2005-04-15 ch 14, | abuseI really like this story. Update soon! |
| chevy-luv 2005-03-13 ch 14, | abuseYAY! they're dating ! please update soon:) |
| Wolfie Star26 2005-03-12 ch 14, | abuseI sorta hope that Carmen didn't throw the pregnancy tests away in her trash. Cuz if her dad ever went in tehre to get something and saw those, oh man would she be in big trouble. I love it, update soon. |
| chevy-luv 2005-03-07 ch 13, | abuseomigod. thatz so funny. i was laughing so hard with my friends. rock on |
| mia 2005-03-06 ch 13, anon. | abuseoh my god...ive already reviewed this chapter..ffs what is up with FP?? I got reviews and now I only recieved emails...i thought itd be chap 14! bastards... |
| shazza 2005-03-06 ch 13, anon. | abusefinally! was it the comment i left in your live journal, lol. i need to re read this, since when did they get serious for her to show him her bedroom like that?? lol...see? you need to update more regular! the readers will love you more, take it from me...i do and i get hugs, lol. anyways good update...her friend was being a right ** though. |