My hamster died today
I read this poem and it really lightened me up
thank you

Very sad... WEll I love sadness it's fun to read...

Graceful in its simplicity, which proves you don't have to be Emily Dickinson to make poetry flow right. Only thing wrong I caught- "I can't BARE to live without you"

First of all, I'm very sorry about your grandma and about your hamster. *hugz* Second, I love your poem. I think you conveyed your pain very well. My hamster died a few years ago. Your poem brought back all the memories of my hamster. I was almost in tears as I read through your poem.

aww...i know exactly how u feel. but i only had a pet, my grandma didn't die yet. i miss my pet.. :-(

Nice. Loss is a hard thing, but sadly, great inspiration for poetry. I understand it must be hard, but please keep writing things like this. No errors I could find on first glance. Enjoy!