:D haha. wow... that's... wow. :)
thanks for this wonderful and sexy oneshot! XD ;P

thats sounds like somthing i would do! lol

its funny and cute

Wonderful short. I really enjoyed it!

All I have to say is brilliant(:
I freakin love it :D

Hey, I like your story.. you have a good writing style, keep it up, and make more great stories.. ^^

Yeah, you did lapse into third person once or twice, I noticed. I want to say I liked it, but the ending seemed a little weak.

The line with "No you're drunk!" was pretty funny, though. :)

This was a pretty good story. I like your one-shot style more than other authors i've read cause, even though it leaves you wanting for more it doesn't leave you with a THAT"S IT! So i liked it pretty much...keep writing! And I wouldn't mind if you decide to extend the story a bit more haha ;).

Well since you know that you did laps into thirdperson, I won't mention that, but there was also a time when you laps into present tence rather than past tence. I don't know if this was on purpose or anything, becaus it made sound like the end which would have worked if you didn't go back into past tence afterwards.
Other than that it is very well written and an enjoyable read. I laughed out loud. Sometimes you need to write little one shots when you're working on longer peices to give your brain a break. So don't feel bad. Good job.

nice story

this is ah-mazing. keep on writing!

Nice. ^^ But I have a friend named Luke/Lucas so it was abit awkward around the end but none the less, it was great! =]

Cute story. Can't wait to try your other stories.

Awesome, Awesome, Awesome...all i can say is that it was very well written!! Keep writing!! ~Angela

haha very cute
xx

this was great. keep up the good work. where abouts in toronto does it take place??