i like this part
The setting sun sets the sky afire,
Brilliant reds and purples dancing
The colored leaves paint the ground
I close my eyes to hear the sound

=D

Hey girl
this poem was so cool, very descriptive, imagery and all that.
perfect timing too since fall is definitely here!
c u soon!
love ya
trish

beautiful. i've read so much saying the opposite this one really stands out. lovely.
check my stuff out if you've got the time
iNzaNiTi

yeah they can...a very "take a step back and be the watcher" outlook here...i like it, its deeply intuned with nature which we sometimes all fail to take notice of and neglect...i like it.

Good poem! My favorite line:

We always chase the big things,
The others we pass by

It's so true these days.

-Emma