Hey! My poem is also called "Fallen Angels". It is as deep as yours is, however. Please don't remove your songs. I've just started reading them! This is a really wonderful song. You don't think it's wonderful? Check out my version of "Fallen Angels" and compare it to yours. I love everything about this: there is a very sophisticated tone in this song, and a very large vocabulary used. This is beautiful! Thanks for posting it on FictionPress!

nice song.

I'm really impressed with your work! Keep it flowing! ^_~

Great song. I really enjoyed it, and even though I have no clue as to what your tune may be, I find myself inventing one. (Wish I could hear yours though) In my opinion, that's a sign of a well-written song. I like the chorus especially. Keep it coming! (Thanks for the review by the way ^_^)

~PMC

Love it. Fallen angels are fun!

That was really good. I think I'm jealous of your ability to write lyrical/song poetry. I really like the emotion of the poem from the narrator and how he/she tries to justify him/herself; this makes the poem realistic since, even when they realize that they are the ones at fault, people tend to try to defend their actions. I also find the story of the poem to be a true and common one; people often take for granted what they have never lost. Anyways, I think this is a very good poem with nice imagery, a really great chorus, and words that naturally flow from your mouth as you read. Please continue writing, ~Crimson Scythe (Lanti Arlit)

You're poems are awesome. And you get a lot of reviews, not that that's the point, but, you know...or maybe you don't. I'll just leave now.

Thanks for reviewing my poem... Anyway, I love this song/poem of yours, it's excellent.

Maybe you also feel that you can be surrounded by people, yet feel reclusive and uninvolved in their world. Feeling so alone, like your intruding. I see many qualities that you possess, aren't all that different from mine. I have a small group of friends all of whom seem as if they dont need me there, I love your style of writing, please write more.

wow that's good! it kinda reminds me of my story ' Raining Tears ' good writing.
Fazed Angel

Oh my god that was awesome!
I would love that to be a song, I can just hear it being one ::hums along to music::
GREAT job, love it...theme I center on a lot in writing and well...everything.
I think we've all been there.
Have a great one
tricia

Oh my god, this is beautiful. Absolutely beautiful... I am going to print this out and paste it on my walls, if i may?

Nice ! the word angel just rules the whole song. Oh and thanks for reviewing my song.

I saw you checked out my poem so I decided to give urs a look ^.^ This was really good- It's like a song the way it's written. I love your choice of metephores!!

Whoa. That was really good.

W,

The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King