Of all your poetry is this section, "Broken" I enjoyed the best. Its philosophical meaning is one that can be found in much fantasy, or then real life. Do you write any kind of fantasy?

great expression

depressing but greatly written

Interesting.

u rock.

Interesting concept, but good poem. I like it a lot.

This is an interesting little poem. I like it.!

This is a very touching poem that relates to our world very nicely. I kinda wish that we were a land that treasures cardboard boxes instead of kings. Very touching, very good. Man!
Genine**

Oh I like this one! What a pointed look at the state of our world! I've known some kings who made very bad poor men, but I've known some poor men who have made wonderful kings. My father was one of them! A very good write!

OMFG YOU'VE BEEN WRITING FOR TWO DAYS AND YOU'RE KICKING MY BUTT. I HATE YOU. *jealousy*

make this longer. it's good but too short.