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LiCkInG-my-WoUnDs 2009-03-21 . chapter 11
]You know when I was reading this story for the first 8 chapters I wasn't really getting into it. I thought your characters weren't well developed and seem boring. The only one I liked was Saki but now I like Tomiko because she seems hilarious especially her competitive side reminding me of me. You keep mentioning BoA throughout the story. I LOVE BOA! Well, I'm not an obsessed fan but a big fan. The chapters are getting better now. Cho is very bitchy, isn't she? But I like her too especially her dirty tactics. haha They're hilarious. Well, the ones in the beginning but the ones like setting her hair on fire, etc were too far.
Risu 2004-02-25 . chapter 20
That vas greeaat!I luvs its!
Aw...so cute!!
yasuyasu 2004-02-20 . chapter 20
AW, what a nice ending. I was seriously disappointed at first when I read the top paragraph, I was like, oh no, it ends just like that!?! And then I read through all the author notes and was somewhat relieved to know that at least, there was a better ending, hahah.
Thanks for reviewing my story by the way, I thought that it really sucked, because I was rushing throughout the whole thing... Gah... I was pleasantly surprised today though, I just found out that I won the first prize for that essay. o_o... Hahah, once in a million, man.
aznistic 2004-02-15 . chapter 2
okay your chapters are getting long already *wipes sweat*
but still... i'd forgotten how much i liked Hitoshi ^__^;;. AW.
aznistic 2004-02-15 . chapter 1
lol let's try this again...
I REALLY like the atmosphere so far; it's so reminiscient of Forever Blue! *_*. Of course, you gotta love Saki ^_^ And Tomiko seems like she'll be a good main character too!
Green Yoshi 2004-02-15 . chapter 20
FIRST KISS! NO GOODNIGHT HANDSHAKE, A KISS! YAY!..ahem... I'd like to apologize for my temporary lack of profesionalsim, but FIRST KISS! Ok, that was my first thought when I finished, my second is: NO (in case fictionpress cuts this down, there WERE 32 n's and 46 o's ^~) IT CAN'T BE OVER! YOU CAN'T TAKE AWAY MY SEUNG! omg, i started cracking up when you mentioned Jen n Kell. Hmm, no relation eh? Omg, I havn't seen you guys in so long! I'm glad I had such a lage (hahahahaha) part in your story, since I can't write my own. I think I'll stick with my poetry. Can't wait for your next fic, won't wait for a sequel/prequel, and whats wrong with sap? sap is good, long live sap!
~Green Yoshi~
P.S. SEUNG RULES, sorry for the randomness, its kinda late
Green Yoshi 2004-02-15 . chapter 19
I said 20 more chapters! what do you mean this is the second to last! ITS NOT FAIR! I want to keep reading! and actualy, since i havn't been online in so long, I DO get to keep reading... ^^ but THEN I have to stop, and I don't want to! Li'l tip, try to make your dialouge more casual. When was the last time you said however? like, ACTUALY said however? Yeah, its easy to write, but say? lol, on to the next chapter!
~Green Yoshi~
P.S. where the * did Seung go; you used my phrase too early, lol; and I LOVE WINTER! thats all, for now
idesel 2004-02-14 . chapter 20
Your too much of a good guy. Giving tomiko a nice happy ending like that. But it made me smile. I'm kinda glad it's over, but don't you stop writing mister! I love your stories even if I can't read them cause I'm going blind. (soccer accident...i'll be ok in a few days..i hope) Welp lemme know when you post your new story.
Cindy Moon 2004-02-14 . chapter 20
I've got to hand it to you this has a kick ** ending. (HAH! I actually scrolled down and read everything! Aren't you proud of me?) Your story was a great change of pace for me; I'm actually using it as a standard. It's so much lighter than my story. I couldn't help but kill off most of my characters. Now that its over, I don't know what else to occupy my time with. ^_~
-Cindy Moon *)
Cindy Moon 2004-02-14 . chapter 19
-eyes burning- j/k. I quite enjoyed this chapter actually. I'm not quite sure why; I'm not fighting female instincts any longer. Not much to say about this except uh ^^ It's finally ending!
-Cindy Moon *)-proceeds to chapter 20-
yasuyasu 2004-02-14 . chapter 18
That was a horrible cliffhanger! *Cries* Your story is so go~d! I think I spent 4 hours reading it. All that emotion was flowing through me... *Cries* Argh, hurry up and update already!
Green Yoshi 2004-02-07 . chapter 18
lol, Lage bust... such entertaining typos!
Ok, no question about it anymore, I am Seung. In almost every single way... how fun... In any case, you're evil, making me wait till the next chapter for the message. It's all well and good when its a novel, I just have to turn the page, but I have to wait a week. A WEEK. Now thats just not nice! O, and when I saw the title, I thought you were gonna insert another of my poems, lol. Too bad, maybe next time eh? Did it inspire this chapter in anyway? I don't see how it could but... Update more often, and stretch it longer than 20 chapters! how bout 28? or 328? 328 would be nice! I really love this story, one of the best i've ever read, right up there with the greats. Tolkien eat your heart out! Seriously, you should wright a sequel, that would be so cool. Or or a prequel, like when Mihye and Seung get together, or Kai and Seung's friendship, or Tomiko and Kai's relationship through Seung's eyes. Anything that would get me more Seung related chapters!
~Green Yoshi~
P.S. Go Seung! Back to Japan! Now!
Cindy Moon 2004-02-07 . chapter 18
Yes! I finally made it to the end of the chapter! -rubs eyes- Hey, this isn't Kansas! Nice touch with the repetition there, and a nice shopping get together with all the three women in Seung's life. ^^ I'm so proud of you; you've managed to insert flashbacks without actually having to state it. Hm what else is there to say? Well, very good filler chapter, a little long for my taste, but hey what can I say? I love short chapters, I'm really glad you updated though. =]
Lolz, the next time I see my Seung ditch English I'll be sure to drag his sorry ** back there ^_~
Until next post then, I'll be waiting.
-Cindy Moon *)
idesel 2004-02-07 . chapter 18
Of course we like Mihye. Will this story have a happy ending? Arg wait don't answer that, let it be a suprise. Gez Cho really is a shopper, I only go shopping for like manga or somthing. Like when I go to the mall I usually just walk around with my friends, we never BUY anything...to cheap. ^^ well hurry up and update!
Mint 2004-01-26 . chapter 17
*JUMPS UP AND DOWN EXCITEDLY AND SCREAMS* ...
*MAJOR SQUISHES YOU* ... =D
Lol, sorry I didn't review when it first came out! O.O I actually read it a couple of times xDD [maniacal fan = ME!] Haha ... ^^;; Ek. Stalker of HANDS. xDD
Anyway, thanks for making Mihye 80% of the chapter *dies laughing* You know what I've got to say about her, I've told you ALL I wanted to say about her, so I'll shut up for now. ^o^ Thanks for making her so lovely! LOL, you'll really see that I'm exactly like her if we ever get a chance to meet up! Mihye Mihye *waves flag* She's so funy ;D And YUP! I CAUGHT ZE LINK BTWN HER AND SEUNG!! *DANCES* =D Haha, thanks ;D, you know how much I love my Seungy. ^_~
Oh, and I do love the advice she dispensed to Seung. ^_^ The whole scene between her and Seung with her telling him what to do nearly make me sniffle T_T Makes her sound more older and sensible than the genki girl she is; which is soo me. *_* People think I'm a genki 15 yr old kiddo but they change their opinion of me once I start my counselling session ... xDD
Ok ... other than that ... *switches to solemn reviwer mode*
This chapter was pure angst at the end T_T OH MAN. *upsetto* How could Seungy just leave like that?! *thwacks him with a stick* Gosh, I see the fall of Seung and Tomiko *weeps* I CAN'T BELIEVE he left without a word! That must mean HANDS is like, ENDING!? Oh man. Much as I can't wait for your next story; please don't torture your characters like that.
And Cho's going to leave just when I started liking her too -_-U *sighs* Well the both of them better get back to Tokugawa ASAP. I don't want HANDS to end when I'm part of it (lol - even tho I know I'm going to be _ _ xD) *sees the angst pile up* NO. HANDS MUST HAVE A HAPPY ENDING.
And that's about all I have to say ... ^_^;; :: pokes you with a stick :: Update, you! Enough of your busyness, I want to see more of me =D [omg your egomaniacaness is rubbing off me -_-"] ^^;;
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