WOW.

You got me as a FAN.

I totally LOVE ur WORKS. All are amazing!

Keep writing and More power!

I liked how you displayed that he was freed by the object of his affections love. Thank you so much for the review!!

I love the hesitation this guy feels about admitting his feelings for the girl. The ...'s add nice insight into how unsure he's probably feeling. Or not unsure just... new to this love thing. *laughs* Favorite bit: And I am… loving it. I am …Loving her. There's so much emotion in there-- I can just *hear* the pauses, the almost-surprise that he must be feeling.
It's very, very good. I really like it.

Hey...didn't I revieew this one already? LOL.
Away!
Aceles

Jess, now you know I love this! I love the way you write of how love can make a man so...tender. Sorry, I DO repeat myself, but I love how a strong man can feel helpless without the woman he has fallen for. Excellent, Jess! Jen

i don't know much about Final Fantasy, but that was great. Have you ever heard of e. e. cummings?

You always do make me cry...I guess, that's a good thing. You're an amazing writer as I've said so many times over. Honestly, I am VERY jealous of you ^^ But as long as you write more and make me feel incompetent, yet still so good...Write more and forever. Later.
~Shuffle Queen~

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Wow, that's all I can really say. That was excellent.

Wow, awesome. The way you typed this one up really adds to this one! I don't know what else I can say... Bravo!

Very heartfelt and true to the point. It also seemed to be at the perfect length to make it effective. Great job.
~Lidless Eye

That's it, you're going on the favorite authors list! the things you write seem like they come from a poetry book or something!

Thats awsome!

That was awesome. I love the feeling and rythym you've used.

FFVII is awesome, and he is one of my favorite characters! This is a beautiful poem, and does remind one of that oh so wonderful Vincent.