i like the repetition of the line... "im playing with your pain..." _

great work! i like the 2nd stanza best.

wow.. that was awesome... i love the 3rd stanza! sounds a lot like something i would write... its really good!

-Niniane, Lady of the Lake-

revenge can be so sweet but sometimes its not worth it! great poem nicely written!

YES, REVENGE IS SWEET! This is a good poem, and it's nice to see something from someone who isn't all "Revenmge is bad, let it go." Last bit, I agree, did leave a bit to be desired, specifically the last line, but on the whole the poem roccks. good job

this is really strong. I don't like feeling this emotion myself, but I think that the poem has reminded me so much. brilliant poem.

Eww, nice and dark revenge poem, great stuff! I loved the repetition, and the rhyming was superb as always. Keep writing!

Wow... excellent poem... excellently worded & I cna totally relate... revenge is a great thing!

hey. very good, i like this a lot, very morbid, and revenge is a subject i always findgood in poetry. keep writing. Twilight

This is good especially the first paragraph

yeah, so what if it's odd? it's good! i like your style, an up-front, grotesque horror. good job! i'll definetly be adding this to my fav. stories list.

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