great poem, well written

please read and review my poem/story

I really liked your poem. It was very "simple", yet spoke of very true words. It wasn't sugar-coated nor did it convey that you had tried too hard to make it. It came from you so easily and when I read it I thought it was "cute". The closest resembelance of this poem and mine (in the "simple" sense) is my poem "Waiting", check it out, yeah?

dnt take this the wrong way, but i dnt like readin these poem for steve... im actually cryin cuz of them... reminds me of my current situation... loves sucks... but sucks so much more when it aint returned!

i can totally relate to you!

caz

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OMG!

i felt like that just 2nite with this guy i was with earlier... i wrote a poem bout it and everything... but its not up until next month unfortunatly

caz

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so sweet, i love the whole concept of a little tune... just so sweet

...*runs off to read next chapter

caz

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