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Erika Darkmoon 2006-10-06 . chapter 1
LOL, I found that completely amusing.
FlamingDoritos 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
Wow. that was...wow. this is why i'm happy taht i don't have to take out the trash. ^__^ yeah...well, that was...wow. oh, dear. i'm repeating myself. that's a problem, isn't it? ^_^ well, ciao!P.S. I am not a 40-year-old guy in a speedo. ^__^ Sorry. i felt the need to say that. ignore me, please.
its not Catie its Cady 2006-06-06 . chapter 1
this was a little strange to me, I really felt like it didn't have any point or direction. Although it was quite funny, and you did label it as a humor piece.
Queen of the Shadylands 2006-06-03 . chapter 1
Okay... a tad on the wyrd side there, but hey it was amusing so why not. I liked the bit where you wrote, "Only now, in the hour of my twilight, could I have seen the error in my ways! Oh dear lord! Give me redemption! Forgive me, oh divine seer of the trash!" though stealing from a hobo, tut tut tut. lol.
Absolut Hooliganism 2006-04-27 . chapter 1
That was very strange. And strange is awesome. It's almost complete delerium, I loved it.
Green Beret 2005-07-18 . chapter 1
Didnt really make a lot of sense but isnt that why it's in the humour section?

The writing style in this is quite good, it didnt make me laugh but it was funny and worth the effort to read.

Nice one.
writerchic16 2005-05-29 . chapter 1
uh...ok. Little weird...ok, A LOT weird, but made me laugh.
*Reeses* 2005-05-27 . chapter 1
Wow...I never knew that someone could make a story about trash day. I live in the country, so I have no clue what you're talking about. But your story sounds great! It makes me not want to take out the trash...Keep up the good work

*Reeses*
x Crayons x 2005-04-21 . chapter 1
I liked it.Was quite random*applauds*MwahzKash x
josisolo 2005-03-09 . chapter 1
oh divine seer of the trash!? i like it!-read my fic Flirt...please!
Doofey 2005-02-12 . chapter 1
I like this one too. It makes no sense, but it fills the otherwise boring time with a lot of laughs!
Takatome Ichido 2005-01-08 . chapter 1
Okay. Question: why did you write that? I mean, it was all kind of interesting and vaguely funny, but why?

-- Taka
crazy-lady141 2004-12-05 . chapter 1
Okay. I liked it though! I love stuff like this. :)
Lord Iceberg 2004-12-04 . chapter 1
This isn't exactly how I would have taken the title and made it funny, but that doesn't matter, because your version is funny too! Quite good, especially the slow-fast writing style.
this is my love for you 2004-12-02 . chapter 1
Hmm... reminded me of an Andy Griffiths story about Andy taking out the trash. Fabulous. If you can't tell, i'm bored and i have nothing better to do than read your stuff.
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