|Reviews for individual|
| Soulshifter 8/23/04 . chapter 1
ooh, nice, i feel rather similar to that flower
| LostInReality 12/12/03 . chapter 1
I like this one. If i think about it the flower could symolise something else.
Also in your other poem 'a perfect world'i forgot to say how i liked how you emphasised the bits (crime, haote , love, patience etc) by putting them on seperate lines. It gives the poem a nice effect