 Quavera-Tava 2009-09-23 . chapter 1Can I sat, HIPARKRIT! |
 emerald 2007-02-22 . chapter 1 If you, the author meant what you wrote about a **, well, you are very judgemental and if not, good characterization on the narrator's part. |
 Sarah's State of Grace 2006-02-20 . chapter 1OMG! THAT WAS TO FUNNY! LOL! ROFL! I love it! I'm laughing so right hard now!! LOL! |
 Toast n Guitars 2004-08-23 . chapter 1HAHAHA! Great. Well I hope everything with the red headed ** worked out great, and you got to experiance some more "interesting" things with a girl. Keep writing -Toast |
 Ms. Mya 2004-06-29 . chapter 1Very entertaining..good job! =) |
 Bitten Caliban 2003-11-16 . chapter 1Very amusing.. Could have expanded it a bit, but it's not bad as it is. Not all ** are evil, or dirty, I must say, heh..
Good luck |
 ThirteenSugars 2003-10-28 . chapter 1Quite interesting, but if I may be so bold as to throw in my opinion at your last paragraph. I don't think that just coz one is a **/hoe, people who aren't, shouldn't mingle with them. To do so would just make the non-hoe person bigoted of our ever-changing society. Plus, it would be prejudice in us being humans. Don't get me wrong, I'm against such things (Never been kissed, never been touched, but have been dissed oh so much), but that doesn't mean, I should treat them like the treatment lepers had in ancient times. |
 Saranacian Freak 2003-10-24 . chapter 1Hm...how did the ** know that all girls pretend it's their first time...uh, nevermind... |
 Double Effects 2003-10-04 . chapter 1hello this is your brain calling since you dont use me anymore ive decided to move out and live in my own apartment downtown... If you ever need me... i dont think you will... call me
Good story... BUT DO NOT!! I REPEAT. DO NOT make a sequel. lol |
 Faded Reflection 2003-10-04 . chapter 1interesting. |
 GameFreak7744 2003-10-04 . chapter 1Um, but i HAVE wondered what goes on in a ** mind. I found out to. ;)
Good fic, and cleaverly writen, i like it. |