|Reviews for Devil's Beckoning|
| Artemis Astralstar 6/18/04 . chapter 1
This isn't depressing at all! It's gorgeous.
| Louis the Rogue 6/18/04 . chapter 1
This one is even better than the last one I read. I like poems where an image or phrase sticks with me and I can see the devil standing at the 'gaping chasm of hell'.
| Ashkenaz 5/27/04 . chapter 1
Great poem :) It's full of feeling and does a great job describing how too many people often feel.
| Tarantino 3/29/04 . chapter 1
So this is how its gonna be we are gonna go back and fourth until one of us doesnt feel nice anymore :p Anyways I don't believe in hell but this poem was great because i usually feel the shitty everyday. Good piece and i won't say keep up the good work because this is an old poem and you already have.
| greenelephant 3/16/04 . chapter 1
I like love the way you write. You are a really good writer. Maybe in a few years or so I could be as good as you. One day your gunna be famous!
| DMTS 3/3/04 . chapter 1
It's sad. Very sad. But very very good..HEY! MY SISTER FINALLY PUT SOMETHING GOOD ON! SHE'S PLAYING KORN NOW! XD YOU'RE MY GOOD LUCK CHARM!...This reminds me of a poem one of my friends started and a second of my friends helped them finish.
Ever heard that saying that says "Never drive faster than your Guardian Angel can fly"? XD
| JustForgetMe 1/19/04 . chapter 1
omg..just wow..i love it..it touched me unlike any other poem i have ever read..and i've read a lot of em'..this is amazing..i am putting it on my favs...i can really relate to this...
| OryssaV 12/30/03 . chapter 1
Never fear... if you believe in your guardian angel he/she is there... always... I have one too! So, maybe the things you are asking for are to difficult or not as important as they seem...
I learned to be happy just because of what I have, however little or a lot.
Plus... what is wrong with "Gray" as a color? I rather like it... it is not as catchy and dull (well, you may say it is)... but it is comforatable and it calms me down (especially when I want to plung at somebody and take their eye out)...
IT is A good ONE!
| spazticpoetgrl 12/7/03 . chapter 1
o, me like, this is just like blunt truth right here and its perfect, well as close as it can be, casue nothings perfect but God, yo, anyways, another great one! keep writin -Spaz
| waterbaby 12/7/03 . chapter 1
well writen. good job.
| Dark Evening 12/7/03 . chapter 1
Wow. This is awesome. This is way better than my shit. Lol, and you think my stuff is good, jeez. Your stuff is much better. I can totally see this getting published. D Well,
| Cirien Phoenix 12/6/03 . chapter 1
That sounded pretty cool. I liked it.
Great coice of words, too.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review on Lady Luck.
| Dirty Wallpaper 12/3/03 . chapter 1
very chilling, very doubtful and innocent. i really liked the feeling in this, the isolation, the naievity. great work, kudos!
| swift sky silver 11/3/03 . chapter 1
what are you saying? it's good. keep writing0)
| Winter's Roar 10/22/03 . chapter 1
Ouch, depressing. I love the "maybe my guardian angel has a broken wing" HA cracked me up, reminds me of something a young child would say/ ask. Anyways, i don't know what you're talking about, this poem is fantastic! A brilliant idea, keep up the awesome writings! Never stop, never cease, never quit…yeah. Anyways, marvelous job yet again!