This isn't depressing at all! It's gorgeous.

This one is even better than the last one I read. I like poems where an image or phrase sticks with me and I can see the devil standing at the 'gaping chasm of hell'.

Great poem :) It's full of feeling and does a great job describing how too many people often feel.

So this is how its gonna be we are gonna go back and fourth until one of us doesnt feel nice anymore :p Anyways I don't believe in hell but this poem was great because i usually feel the shitty everyday. Good piece and i won't say keep up the good work because this is an old poem and you already have.

I like love the way you write. You are a really good writer. Maybe in a few years or so I could be as good as you. One day your gunna be famous!

It's sad. Very sad. But very very good..HEY! MY SISTER FINALLY PUT SOMETHING GOOD ON! SHE'S PLAYING KORN NOW! XD YOU'RE MY GOOD LUCK CHARM!...This reminds me of a poem one of my friends started and a second of my friends helped them finish.
Ever heard that saying that says "Never drive faster than your Guardian Angel can fly"? XD

omg..just wow..i love it..it touched me unlike any other poem i have ever read..and i've read a lot of em'..this is amazing..i am putting it on my favs...i can really relate to this...

Never fear... if you believe in your guardian angel he/she is there... always... I have one too! So, maybe the things you are asking for are to difficult or not as important as they seem...
I learned to be happy just because of what I have, however little or a lot.
Plus... what is wrong with "Gray" as a color? I rather like it... it is not as catchy and dull (well, you may say it is)... but it is comforatable and it calms me down (especially when I want to plung at somebody and take their eye out)...
IT is A good ONE!

o, me like, this is just like blunt truth right here and its perfect, well as close as it can be, casue nothings perfect but God, yo, anyways, another great one! keep writin -Spaz

well writen. good job.

Wow. This is awesome. This is way better than my shit. Lol, and you think my stuff is good, jeez. Your stuff is much better. I can totally see this getting published. D Well,
Later.
darkevening

That sounded pretty cool. I liked it.
Great coice of words, too.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review on Lady Luck.

very chilling, very doubtful and innocent. i really liked the feeling in this, the isolation, the naievity. great work, kudos!

what are you saying? it's good. keep writing0)

Ouch, depressing. I love the "maybe my guardian angel has a broken wing" HA cracked me up, reminds me of something a young child would say/ ask. Anyways, i don't know what you're talking about, this poem is fantastic! A brilliant idea, keep up the awesome writings! Never stop, never cease, never quit…yeah. Anyways, marvelous job yet again!

winter