Reviews for Jump to the Depths

Reviews For: Jump to the Depths

twisted little secret 2005-01-25 ch 1,	There's a good rhythm to this piece, I loved the last verse, it really rounded it off well. A good poem.-nix
ladygalad 2004-04-07 ch 1,	like it all but the last line, which makes no sense. Maybe you could add more description about surroundings and feelings.
shinco 2004-02-07 ch 1,	I LOVED IT BUNCHES! Very way cool!
cosmo-queen 2003-12-05 ch 1,	Wow, great poem. I thought that the short stanzas were really effective. I really liked the final stanza. And the line "plunge pool waiting". Keep it up :) cosmo-queen
ArcheimaX12 2003-11-02 ch 1,	wow, soviet was right, some of your stuff is really good. read mine? please...? :P
Dirty Wallpaper 2003-10-23 ch 1,	interesting poem, i especially liked the last stanza, very powerful indeed, kudos.
Roadside Dryer 2003-10-19 ch 1,	Good poem. The last line was a little (I'll admit I have no clue what knave means in the really tired stat I'm in now) Please r+r mine! ^ ^ -he he
Soviet 2003-10-12 ch 1,	Well done, I enjoyed it muchly
msu 2003-10-10 ch 1,	Very exhilirating.
MiNt-BrEaTh 2003-10-09 ch 1,	Cool! I usually don't read poetry but I LOVED yours! Keep Writing and consider a book! PS. Read my story's! They are about Witches and that sort of thing... "Grins evilly"
glitterjewele 2003-10-05 ch 1,	this is so great. what i love most about it, is how it has a texture, especially in the first three stanzas. way to utilize the senses. ;) also really liked the movement, the activity, the physicality of everything. nice rhythm/rhyme to it as well. mmk favorite lines . . . there are so many good ones in this poem . . . sigh ok here goes: "my mind's eye/looks to forget," "a waterfall tumbling," and "a blindfold of vapour." excellent work. :)
Infinity Plus One 2003-10-05 ch 1,	well done db, another good poem.
me 2003-10-05 ch 1,	u hveno idea where it came from?! hee hee its quite good

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