aw! the story was AWSOME!
I loved it!

TEHEE! dont rewrite it babe! ITs FAntastica! Please have a sequel! YAYAYAYA! I totally love nick and caelyn together! There fantastic! I want another one please!

ooh. like it. woops, i meant loved it. great story:))

hey :) i have to say, this story is great. some typos but its still great. :D to answer your questions, a re-write would be interesting, like developing the plot and characters more. but if you do make a re-write, it would be better if you start a whole new story rather than editing per chapter. :) anyways, awesome work. good luck in your writing :)

Your first chapter was hooking and I was into your story at the very beginning.
And I loved every little piece of it.
Caelyn's character is refreshing yet breathtaking.
I love the main character being not perfect but everyone loves her and she's near perfect if you will. and that's exactly what Caelyn is.
Nick.
If I could describe what I think about him in one word..
sexy.
hott maybe?
a hint of cute?
love every single part of him (:

Wow! Amazing story! I absolutely loved it! Please write a sequel if you have the time!

Aryelle

this story was amazing!
:)

like it so far :)

Great story, keep up the good work.

i loved this stroy, even if it is a little cliche. one thing i'd like to know is how to pronounce caelyn's name,

thanx-lizz

interesting read :D i enjoyed it ... great job :)

aw, fantastic story!

Your story idea is pretty good regardless of the clichedness, but I think a rewrite would be nice as they characters are very 2D and don't seem to have any flaws. It would also be best if you made the rewrite seperately because it gets confusing when authors post re-writes chapter by chapter.

sweet. is there a sequel of some sort?

Great story!