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| Unready 2005-12-11 ch 1,  | abusethe last quatrain was perfect. |
| James Rain 2004-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI am really trying to think of any meaning behind this poem, but like it's summary, I can't think of one. But, this is not a bad comment. I have an inkling, but I'm not sure. Still, I love the great use of metaphor and the simplicity of form. This is very haunting. |
| Angerona 2003-11-28 ch 1, | abuseIntresting poem. Where it is fantastic, it feels kinda like you had to be there to get it. You know? Any way there is some great stuff in here. Past shards of shadowed time. That my friend gave me chills. O and AWW. And then the thrid stanza is great. Once again, great work. Keep it up. ~Angerona the Goddess of Death~ |
| Cirien Phoenix 2003-11-04 ch 1, | abuseVery nice piece. (*standing ovation*) Great job! My fave part? This one: So if I lay prostrate before you Throwing back my head You would feast on my broken body Then flee till your guilt was bled- 'Twas freakin genius. I think you did a REALLY great job with this! ~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame P.S. THank you for the review of "Purest Tragedy", I'm glad you liked it. |