"Whispers drifting threw the air." (threw - through)

Short and nice. I love night-time too.

Bless.

o0o0o0o- i like it. Death is always an intreginig topic!

Wow, great poem. Short poems with alot of power, like this one, are the best...

Awesome! I like it.

W,

The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

very cool... excellent description... short but excellently written... amazing poem

wow... yeah parents no let me get an email account of my own... it sucks... oh yeah i'm jamming better than santana... santana's mean... okay let me elaborate... i wrote him a letter askin for an autograph and i got a form letter back saying he couldn't fulfill me request and that i should donate lotsa $ to his fund and spend forty bucks to become a fan club member... yeah... i've been playing guitar all morning... as for boyfriend.. no such luck yet... still on the hunt... grades are fine... not excellent but fine for me... as for the bungee jumping height record... i wish... my life is still really really boring... although i am writing a new story... maybe a little romace piece... we shall see... might post part tonight... well i'm off to check email

plus this review is almost to long.!

good poem.. short and sweet.

Kim

I take it you want it to read "quiet night"?

I think that if you rework it a bit, it could be better. As it is, the wording is a bit "average", although you manage to set the mood wonderfully.