Strong message you portray here... in such a short amount of space you say so much. fav
Hikki-chan

Very short but a very strong message. And what's more you conveyed it well. Love it.

Wow. Beautiful and depressing. (shameless plug: I have a poem called "Mirror" too! And it's one of my better pieces...)

wow, that ws very deep! great job

Aw! I wanna be just like you! I wish i could write poetry Like yours!

I've seen poems alone the lines of this before, but it's a good poem, just the same.

Wow! that was so good! I really really liked it a lot!