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| Aaron Mason 2003-12-26 ch 1, | A song needn't be long to be great. The shortest song I ever wrote was 4 lines long, and it went "so my car's a bucket of bolts/so my car's a peice of **/so my car's a pile of rubbish/but it's mine and you're not driving it" Short and sweet, just like this one. |
| estrela 2003-11-22 ch 1, | it's not that short! compared to some of mine, anyways... yeah. i like it. it feels like someone is really reaching out. maybe i can get Foss (my english teacher) to analyze some of your poems :D |
| Eli 2003-10-21 ch 1, | Your so perfect in many ways you don't know you dont need cleanse your lmost pure |