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Reviews For: Cleanse

Aaron Mason
2003-12-26
ch 1,
A song needn't be long to be great. The shortest song I ever wrote was 4 lines long, and it went "so my car's a bucket of bolts/so my car's a peice of **/so my car's a pile of rubbish/but it's mine and you're not driving it"
Short and sweet, just like this one.
estrela
2003-11-22
ch 1,
it's not that short! compared to some of mine, anyways... yeah. i like it. it feels like someone is really reaching out. maybe i can get Foss (my english teacher) to analyze some of your poems :D
Eli
2003-10-21
ch 1,
Your so perfect in many ways you don't know you dont need cleanse your lmost pure
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