this story is so intrigueing! you have to update soon, coz i really wanna know whats gonna happen next!please! i really wanna know what happened to lucy aswell(you know when she went outside)! and i think that russell is really stuck up and annoying but in the end will become frends wiv lucy (hopefully)!lol adyway keep writing!

I'm happy to see this updated! The plot's going well, and of course Lucy and James didn't really like one another very much. And you have to end it with a cliffhanger! i can't wait to find out what he wants to talk to James about. So update soon.

Woohoo I'm loving this story so far. Can't wait to see it evolve, the mystery is really holding me in suspense and I can't wait for some romance ;)
Love
Toleda

hey, this is lostpirates in fanfiction.net...
I love it!
it's so cute! aw...

I really like where this is going! please write more soon

Interesting chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

cool story. please write more.

Hi, I really like your story!!
Hope to read more soon!
~Conva~

You finally updated! Lucy sounds interesting. I can't wait to see when James meet her again. Hope you update soon!

absolutely spiffy story!
i really really REALLY really liked the beginning paragraph. i like how it flowed. if paragraphs can flow.
it seems like the story's just getting started, but i really like this thing you've built between james and lucy. like, they hate each other (almost) but theyre gonna have to work together anyway.
i think lucy shoulda clocked that mean girl. rawr.
i am twitchy with anticipation for the next chapter.

Nice chapter. James certainly had a lot of suspects in his hand. Maybe he and Lucy could work together, but that could be a bit scandalous. Sorry I don't have better suggestions.

Interesting. Who was it that Lucy saw in the crowd? Kind of impulsive, isn't she?

This looks great. You have all these interesting characters. I'm going to read some more.

Very intriguing! I can't wait to read more!

Wow, confusion reigns. Intriguing. More, please!
~Silvestria~