 Polgara The Sorceress 2003-10-05 . chapter 1Great poem! I love to read and this poem depics what it feels like to read perfectly! My favorite line was,
"With swords of
Silver burning
Bright into the
Dark shadowed night"
I also loved the way it rymed every other line. It gave it a nice little touch. Great job!!
Oh, and thanks for reviewing my poem! ^ ^ |