Very nice, the world needs more poems on this topic. I know so many people who need to read this. I like the rhyme scheme, the consistency throughout the poem kind of ties it together. If you have time, maybe you'd like to read one of my poems, "Why do you jugde?", you seem like someone who might like it. Anyway, nice job.

cool. I wish I'd read that sooner. It took a bet and a slue of homsexual people responding to my first slash story (which is now my semi-masterpeice) to make me re-think my prejudice.
I'm going to distribute this to a bunch of people I know like this. They may not review, but maybe they'll understand.