once again, i love the last line of this poem. you're very good at tying things up with a BANG which leaves readers like, ekeh? i'm never able to do that. in this poem, i liked the rhyming scheme much better. i dunno, to me it just suited it more.

this collection of poetry was very beautiful, you're a talented writer. keep up the great work!

aw! the last line is so sad! i like the style of this poem, although i find the rhyming scheme a little distracting because it sounds a little forced. other than that, it's great, as all your other poems are. i love the last line!

you ask a very good question in this poem... one i had never thought of in a relationship. nicely done!

i like the simple style of this poem. i feel like you've given enough information to the audience without really elaborating on details or events. it's simple and short... very nice.

i love this poem. i love the first line, i lie awake so i will not dream... your vocabulary suits the mood very nicely, it captivates the feelings in this poem. very stunning.

if you have a moment, would you mind reviewing my story, Paths of Destiny? i would love to hear your opinions about it. thanks!

Wow, that is a good one. Please keep it up. I am a big fan of poetry. I look forward to more.
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Thanks for reviewing my stuff and putting me in your favs. Your poetry is very nice. I liked it a lot. You're very good at writing poetry. You're definetly going in my favs

I think Unrequitted Love and Twice Tried are my favorites. The others are cute too. Write more!

Hi Shuffle Queen! It's Jen (Jen23)!
Wow! You are really talented at writing poems. I could never write something like this in a million years.
This was very beautifully done and I could feel the pain by the way you described the feeling of unreguited love. It does hurt so much. Great, great work!_

Aw... so sad. Like I'm one to talk... anyhoo! I like it. It's plain and very straight forward which some people see as bad but I like it a lot. Keep writing! -SK