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| NeWriter 2004-01-06 ch 1,  | abuseI thought I could return the favour by revieweing a work of yours back! I read it and it was very good... but I thought that you could be a little bit more descriptive. use metaphors or smilies... anything that can especify what friends are! Friends are much more than people who catch you when you fall or who make you laugh... think about the word and how it's connected with humans...! This could be much deeper. Otherwise, it was good :D! |