EVIL!! YOU ARE THE EVILNES NESS!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA :'(

Oh no! and you had such a great idea! WHY! WHY IS LIFE SO CRUEL! *runs off screaming/crying and tearing at hair*

*breathes out than starts hyperventalating* oh my god..that was bloody brilliant! A PERFECT START TO A STORY! *faints*

happy story! (haha.. Kaelyn can't member anything about the prolouge-part and the water clan guy is the person she bonded souls with. hehe) i had some free time, so I read it. 's ok if you don't continue it, tho. (just pwese continue ONE of your stories- like Wind's Flame or The Chosen *hint,hint*) ttyl ~lew

hate it when that happens -_-' but i liked the beginning of this chappy... lol. and dont be sry, becuz it happens to me all the time. i have like 50 short stories that are only one chapter long... lol including before dawn

AH! How in the GIANT BLUE FROG could you do this to me! AUGH! LOST INTERST! AH! That was EVIL! FIX IT! WRITE MORE!

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*Sniff*

There, I'm better now. In any case, I kindly request that you writ at least twelve more chapters in this story, and please check up on dreamscape every once and a while, I'm updating it =D

Oh, yah, and please, DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!

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I'm hungry!
Byes!

wow i liked it it was good ^_^ a bit confusing at the end, but i got it - please update this and wind's flame really soonly, ok?? thanks

You're off to an excellent start.I'm eagerly awaiting updates.

haha! I am notorious for giving myself the first review! Well, here it goes! This is the prolouge thingy, it happens like... nine years before the rest of the story. it is indeed a lovely story tho. *smiley* yeah. that's about it. I HAVE ONE REVIEW!