OMg...wow. I think I am too emotional. This made me cry...seriously! Thanks for reviewing me!

Konnichiwa Adela-chan! You're story is really good...Now I see what you got from Zodiac P.I...the Raindrop thing right? hehehe Great story!

Very nice story. Has a lot of potental. I would suggest going back and making it so that you start a new sentence and indent each time a new character speaks, but besides that, I thought it was wonderful.

~Kim