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| Reviews for THE RED ROOM |
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   topyxyz 3/8/11 . chapter 1This is amazing! |
| olgite the squidgal 7/11/09 . chapter 1 You gave this short story an ominous atmosphere which I like since it kept me off-balance as to what was inside the Red Room. It's also great the way you've captured how menacing the unknown is from a child's point of view. |
| Lima Beans 7/20/06 . chapter 1 it does need some touch ones but not alot alomst nonexistant really but there still there. and could u try making alittle more sence in it too? i was alittle lost in some parts like when Tania went to open HER bedroom door u said THE door and not her. thats just one but other than that it was fantastic! my heart was racing when hers was and everything. u have a nice style just a few touch ups so its easier to follow and it will be even more perfect than it is now |
| Monique 7/22/03 . chapter 1 This was a good story and I really enjoyed taking the time to read it. |
| Lil1 10/20/02 . chapter 1 I thought it was something he he...you know...coz I read some stories like this, same red room, same noise, only ending up with the mom being a prostitute-anyway, that's just my dirty mind speaking-NICE STORY! ENDING REALLY SURPISED ME-I GOT A LITTLE SCARED THOUGH! I LOVE GETTING SCARED THAT'S WHY I LOVE YOUR STORIES! Looks at list-oh, this is the last general fiction? Pls. write more! |
| Lee Anna 10 8/19/00 . chapter 1 WOW! This rocks! |
| Denise Willis 4/11/00 . chapter 1 The end of this surprised me...I like to be surprised!Deexxx |
| jai 4/11/00 . chapter 1 whoa, you keep getting better and better!I am in awe! Man, you should find some more places to "publish",I'm sure there's more people who will want to read this! |
| netshark 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Strange...very strange...btw, do you write professionally? |
