aw, this is so sweet. I love it!

So pretty! Definitely one of your best, in my opinion - the subtle rhyming was wonderful. Very good, fave story stuff for sure. Every time I open up one of your pieces I'm always surprised by the variety and creativity; it's nice to read something different in each piece, instead of the same thing over and over again.

Tenika Dargan

WOW! Do you realize the way you set this up with your words, it looks like a ship! lol Or a toilet.. howeve ryou look at it, but I say it looks like a ship and it goes with you poem hehehe ok yup feeling ill don't mind me *grins*

*Jenna*

aw very sweet & cool... still love your format & imgaeruy.. you really have a great way of painting a picture!