Powerful story! Thank you.

Nice story. You told me about your concept of the Deathsinger, and it is good to see a story about one. Are your diffirent stories in the same world or are they independent of each other?

This was a very good story with a very interesting idea behind it. I like the idea of a Deathsinger, it's a really cool idea, but you need to work on a few things in your writing. For the most part your grammar and spelling are good (probably better than mine), but I noticed a few times you had a couple lines of dialogue in the same paragraph. Usually when someone else starts talking, you want to start a new paragraph.
Also, at the very end, was the robed man the Jarudanian general? I'm guessing that the robed guy stabbed him? A bit confusing at that part, but otherwise a great story, filled with some really spectacular writing.