great poem addressing violence i really liked it!

Although I've never been physically abused, I understood it well. Family abuse is terrible. The physical stuff is terrible, but I think what really screws a person up is the emotional part that comes along with it. Awesome job.

-Frodo

I liked it, the rhyming was a little more plain than some of your others but it got the message across well. Great work! Keep writing!

aw very sad... I always feel bad for poeple who are pysically abused... excellent poem