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| Single White Rose 2004-01-20 ch 1,   | WOW! I can SO relate to this! Man, it's like you took the words right out of my brain, very cool! I definately give this four stars! ciao. ~SWR~ |
| ColorCrayons 2003-11-03 ch 1, | good good good! i liked it a lot, good emotion and strong message ~color outside the lines~ |
| amanda 2003-11-02 ch 1, | i can really relate to this feeling...i sometimes feel jealous to those who have many friends. But i know the more friends u have, the more of ur personal life is revealed...and i want to try to stay a little mysterious..doesnt everyone? |
| Kowski 2003-10-24 ch 1, | yeah you im'ed me and so i decided to check out some of your stuff. very nice poem you've got here, your emotions and feelings are displayed wonderfully. |
| PirateLass 2003-10-13 ch 1, | *sniff* Aw, this made me sad, J... Now I feel kinda guilty and I don't know why... Yes, all of your... Wait, 30? Damn! I mean, I knew you were kinda popular but... Damn! Anyways, all of them say hi. Well... *counts on fingers* 8 or 9 of them, at least. Great poem, J. |
| Mealyn 2003-10-13 ch 1, | Aw...maybe you need to come to San Marin...*sniffle* nice poem. |
| Aimee Raven 2003-10-13 ch 1, | aww, this is soo sad, but its good, very emotional, good work! lvoe and good luck. Twilight |
| PsychoticNetJunkie 2003-10-12 ch 1, | Well it would be better if you fixed some spelling errors but the poem overall was good an also dont use internet lingo it annoys some people hey cool i procrastinate on my homework too we procrastination! Oh a mix of caffenine and sleep deprivation not good... PsychoticNetJunkie |
| The Locker Troll 2003-10-10 ch 1, | I miss you too! Nice poem! I wish you could be at our school to witness all of our crazed psychoness. It feels so empty without you and the C and the E there. You must meet The Locker Troll! You must hear it's rhymes! Anyway...guess what? I tell you this all the time. Please, less typeos and spelling errors! It PEEVES me! It VEXES me! Please don't call me up again to ask me how to spell disease! Otherwise, awesome poem. Awesomely...well, you know my phrase. Yeah. That's it. I WISH YOU WERE AT OUR SCHOOL! Tasuki is off the meat rack, tomodachi! Hai, you DO attract a lot of anime and manga people. Friends forever! Eien! ^_^x |
| shawna 2003-10-09 ch 1, | oh my god! jessica that was really good, not only did it almost make me cry and think about the same stuff that going on with me and my life, it was very true and real! I think that everyone should read your writtings because you seem to always write about truw things in our lifes! |
| ~*~shelly~*~ 2003-10-09 ch 1, | hey chicka! good poem! loL... kinda sounds like ur depressed... but yea... haha... don't get mad at me for sayin that! um... i liked it... and don't wrry! you'll make new friends! :) ~*~ shelly ~*~ |
| Tony 2003-10-08 ch 1, | I like this one, free form has always been my favorite of the poetry styles. Best thing about this poem? We know you aren't holding anything from us! |
| Sauron's Minion 2003-10-08 ch 1, | ello!woa poem...i feel loved...not really...yeah... |
| Crazed One In Socks 2003-10-07 ch 1, | THREE! WHAT ABOUT ME?! ok, so we don't really get to see eachother...but we talk online. oh, and do you have the second weekend of November free? |