Don't I know how that goes. I love how simple, yet incredible sweet this is. Wonderful job.

I enjoyed this a whole lot! Extremely touching. I normally don't go for the fluffy poems, but this is one I like. Good Job.

-Pen

good job! i really like it! and i can totally relate! and btw i only review stuff i REALLY like! so good job and keep writing
me

aw!
i loove this, its soo cute, and aw... short and sweet, compact and impactful... aww... Keep it up!

You might've taken the "if only" repetition a bit too far to my liking, but it still works somehow, with the rhyming and all.

aw I like the if only repeated... very sad.. short but excellently written