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Reviews For: Beautiful Deceptions

Micol Wydor
2003-10-07
ch 1,
No html needed here. ^-^ You just upload it and such, and it looks just as you've typed it, spacing, paragraphs, italicize and all.

Hm...sounds like a song. It's very vibrant, which I like.

--I was so gullible to your fairytales. --

This line sounds wierd. I think you should maybe change the word 'gullible'.
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