Great work! *applodes* keep it up!

beautiful and powerful...wish i could say more, btu i've never been really good at reveiws ^-^

wow... powerful. very.
'she was once again wrong'
damn good line, really... disheartening? hmm well yeh whatever that word is for when yu read it and go: oh... and a frown goes on your face. you know what i mean! ... well, maybe you dont, but i do! ill shut up now before you kill me. or yourself. or everybody, and then yourself. and then me. no, wait, that wouldnt work, i ... ahh, damnit. my head is going to explode... *pop*

whats this about?.

Great job, I love it.

Enjoyable to reed!

-Pen

But how come you dont care? thats not nice!! lol... but its an excellent poem... very great descriptions.. who wrote the original?? is it on fictionpress?? cuz id love to see it