Wow...*claps softly in astonishment* Right on the money...just...wow. This is what so many people live for, die for...-_- I'm repeating the poem, aren't I? Oyee... Anyways, it's so universal, such a clear picture, so much great emotion... O.O Very, very nice job.
-Arii

This is great...WHY can't you have any speeling or grammer errors, you are making me feel stupid. : P Great job

Really beautiful - this piece in particular summons up some wonderful images. The word selection was good; all in all, an excellent piece. Per usual, well done!

Tenika Dargan

Hello my dear...oh I think I'm sick like you were, it's not funny *vomits* ok I'm not that sick but still lol OUCH! Yeah anyway THIS POEM IS MY FAVORITE! - it's so sweet, the longest line is my favorite "I dream of the smell of sunshine and feeling shards of light dance upon my skin" aw *sniff sniff SNIFF* I think I'll add this to my favorites.

*Jenna*

WOW! This was amazing! I really enjoyed this poem!