Format: Great, gives for a good flow and read, the lack of punctuation aloows you to flow from line to line as if it was a beautiful mountain stream.
Words: Great choice of words showing talent and consistency. All contribute to the flow and the tempo.
Overall: A must read out of your works, it caught my attention anyway. Well done any keep smiling
PS I love biology, lol, dont hate me for it.

*claps*
That's nice. I like your other ones too, but it won't let me review. ;
Good topic, and nice rhyming... _
Good job _

after reading your other poem this poem seems pretty basic..some cliche parts and the rhyme scheme doesn't fit with your style...good points i like the set me free and as you've made me...all in all good ideas run amuck.

hm...interesting poem...shall I say, dang, you have a long bio...actually I've probably seen longer, but at the moment...
K, the rhyming's nice, love the shortness of the ending. It seems to flow

Hiya! Good poem, i like the ryhmes too! sad topic but good idea, well done!

Cya )

*WG

wow dude, this is awesome!

Me like... me like rhymes... & its an excellent poem altho I really cant relate