I love this. I totally have a beat in my head and everything. But that's probably just cause i'm musical like that. I really like it. It'd be cool to hear what melody/thingy you have to go along with it (if there is one, which i assume there is)

That has a sort of twisted ending, that I (big surprise here) liked it. I have liked almost all of your work that I've read so far. Your very talented.

I really like this. Really. A lot.
It's haunting.
-crimson

Hiya again lol, U aint written anything in ages i missed ya stuff, but now ya back and im lovin it! Cool song m8

I LOVE IT!! hehe brillaint (or however its spelled) thanx for reviewing my story...im trying desperately to continue it but poems keep popping into my head :-P But your stuff is GREAT!

Lotsa luv,

X Kathryn X

okay, well, maybe it's short but i STILL like it

~color outside the lines~

Heehee =D Its different =D For te title. How about "Cage"

- Crucified Sanctity -

wow this was really good...i dunno wut else 2 say...
Skye