  Becki 2007-02-21 . chapter 3 ok last comment of today, hey btw, cool ending to the story and liking the description of the two fighting wooden robots keep at it :D!! |
| Becki 2007-02-21 . chapter 2 ok this is my second to last review before i fall asleep on the keyboard, still liking this story and the friendship in it its quite sweet really, keep at it! |
| Becki 2007-02-21 . chapter 1 ok so jemima was me lol, hey, another cool story but you need more lead female characters who aren't eye candy and do other stuff than just stand and watch the fights |
  Avalon's Guardian 2003-12-13 . chapter 3Hee=re we go! Yippie! Plot defention! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...where did that come from? ...Update soon...I feel odd today... |
| Avalon's Guardian 2003-10-31 . chapter 2 Interesting...this sounds like it's gonna be a good story. Ah here comes the obnoxious fantasy rater in me. Anyway's good story. |
| Avalon's Guardian 2003-10-20 . chapter 1 Nice. I'm a huge judge of fantasy and I'd give it a high rating so far. Also cheak out my website (it's on my bio here) and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE sign my geustbook the only people who have signed it are my friends who I blackmailed to. Update soon!
Ja Ne ~_^ |
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