It was very pretty. Just as I told Manju, I just LOVE romance poetry, especially when there is a proposal. I've always dreamed about being proposed to by a certain beach with the person I'm with now. I know I'm still young, but I like to dream! Great job, is all I can say. Keep writing!

Evangeline-Avalonn

That was realistic (Actually I wouldn't really know, it just seems that way ;))and well written. I liked it.

good story type of scenario, but i do not know if it really has a poetic merit, but it is realistic, and thusly good representation.

Simple, pretty, and nearly breaks the barrier of steel ice that I've put up against such feelings...I almost want to weep, but alas, I'm not letting this wall down. Congratulations; you almost brought me to cry. Yes, at heart I'm a pathetically hopeless romantic. But I'm killing that with my apathy. It's more balance this way. ^^ Anyway, sweet poem. Oh, and thanks for reviewing me.

you captured the emotion quite well. I like it!

Aww, this is beautiful! :) I really can't think of any criticism.

Thanx for all the reviews, by the way. They were really appreciated :)

Blessed Be,

Andaren x