I quite enjoyed reading this poem. It was indeed very deep and serious. I like it. Great work, do keep it up!

~*~AbunaiChikara

Very beautiful. Soothing work.


~Heart of the Sword

That was soo sweet! Great job!

i liked this alot. it seemed very child-like but then the last line felt desperate and more like teenage angst! it had a lot of emotion.
great work.

awesome poem. This has to be one of my favorites of yours. I like the way it flows and I like the subject. Good Work!

well done, i really like it!! and it's today!! - i'm guessing u no what i mean.
anyways...thankyou!! i like the idea too!! cya =)

This was very beautiful...I really liked it. Good writing!

~Lucky~
(Thanks for reviewing me!)