hey loves depressing what can u do about it. great poem cool. Linkin park 4 life!
"on my grave put a dove, so everyone will know i died 4 love"

This was a hot poem. Depressing, but good. I think like that all the times, its all gravy.

Keep it up, school sucks.

Krikoris

Lovely little poem. Thanx for the compliments gurl.

Sov: I guess I kinda fit that description already, don't I? *chuckles* oh well. Nice peom mon ceries.

Yes, and keep writing!

Peachez _

omg i loved it! i think it was poetic, u just have to be in the right state of mind i guess. I especialy loved the ending: the day we die, it lasts forever. LOVE IT!

Pothe

Aww... Well I don't think you suceeded in keeping out the depression, unless your other works are VERY angsty, cuz this is the first one I read. Very good though. Very good. This anything that happend to you? Or just a kind of story.