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| Maggie Summers 2008-09-28 ch 1, | abuseHoly... You are a crazy good writer. I feel so bad for that girl! I don't know what to say, except that that was really, really good and I feel really sad and I want to read more of your stuff! -Maggie |
| K.M.Mackenzie 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is really interesting in a dark sort of way. Thank you. And I like how you record time in a really quick way, showing us the glimpses of what we need to know and not recounting a whole lot of useless rubish that barely even fits to the plot. |
| somuchformyhappyending 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseamazing. I love you. you're officially my hero. bec |
| eyesoar 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abusei really like this. it was descriptive, yet not to the point where i wanted to claw my eyes out :) M-azing. |
| Professional scatterbrain 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseSimply unforgettable |
| strawberries'n'sugar 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseWow - you have amazing talent. This story is fantastic. Absorbing. Kinda sad and disturbing and great with it. I'm gonna go read more. B. |
| girl-23 2004-04-10 ch 1, | abuseWoah, amazing is about all I can say. Really really good. I like how you didn't even have to mention names or anything, it was perfect just like that. I'm going to read more of your stories! Laura |
| Escapist 2003-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI don't believe I've ever told anyone here this before, but you honestly have an amazing talent. This is written beautifully...absolutely amazing. |
| Eleanor 2003-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseNaadeyah. You are going to be famous someday. That is all. (no it's not. e-mail me! i'll clear out my inbox!) |
| vintage heartache 2003-10-13 ch 1, | abusewow...i'm in awe of your talent...i usually don't go for short stories, but this one had me hooked! brilliant! |
| Brightflower 2003-10-09 ch 1, | abuseOh, my God! That was so...I want to say scary, but that's not quite it. Sad, I guess? Disturbing. Whatever it was, it was great! I really liked this story, because of the way it made me feel. You know, sad and disturbed and all, all at once. It was great how you wrote the characters so well that I could really see them, and I even almost felt bad for the guy. Especially because of the ending. I don't know, maybe I should hate him, but for some reason I just can't. I don't know, it's not like I'm sticking up for him or anything, not at all. I just...don't know. See, I'm thinking of them as real people, that's how well-written this is! Yikes, I've written a long, pointless review, so I should probably go. I loved this piece, and you're super talented! |
| Heaven Take Me Home 2003-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThat is extremely emotional, and written very vividly. ~*Autumn*~ |
| Traced In Green 2003-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really good! And by the way, good taste in music. Pretty much the same as mine lol. Keep writing. luvs Young'n'HopelessKid |
| Bitch Du Jour 2003-10-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh...I cannot believe this! I am in awe of you, hon! This is one of the greatest stories I have ever read. To be able to portray something like this is just...amazing. |