i have no idea what i would do if i got raped. def start biting my nails again thats for sure cause i used to do that all the time. wow though if he killed himself that would be so much different! good job :).

I'd feel extremely guilty if I were her, cause he died. Meaning he felt guilty because it's suicide. But then again, if someone raped me I would feel so mad I might rip of his head...
So tragic but perfect too.

Usually when I think of rapists I find them sick and deplorable and all that jazz but I feel terribly sad for this guy. I mean yeah what he did was horrid but I guess it just seems so harsh she hates him, he hates himself, he kills himself and she's still doesn't fell at least a little better. I've never been raped (duh) so I have no idea how terrible that must feel but I would be relieved I didn't have to kill the rat bastard and go to jail.

This was amazingly power. Genius, even.

Holy...
You are a crazy good writer. I feel so bad for that girl!
I don't know what to say, except that that was really, really good and I feel really sad and I want to read more of your stuff!
-Maggie

This is really interesting in a dark sort of way. Thank you. And I like how you record time in a really quick way, showing us the glimpses of what we need to know and not recounting a whole lot of useless rubish that barely even fits to the plot.

amazing. I love you. you're officially my hero.

bec

i really like this. it was descriptive, yet not to the point where i wanted to claw my eyes out
:)

M-azing.

Simply unforgettable

Wow - you have amazing talent. This story is fantastic. Absorbing. Kinda sad and disturbing and great with it. I'm gonna go read more. B.

Woah, amazing is about all I can say. Really really good. I like how you didn't even have to mention names or anything, it was perfect just like that. I'm going to read more of your stories!
Laura

I don't believe I've ever told anyone here this before, but you honestly have an amazing talent. This is written beautifully...absolutely amazing.

Naadeyah.

You are going to be famous someday.

That is all.

(no it's not. e-mail me! i'll clear out my inbox!)

wow...i'm in awe of your talent...i usually don't go for short stories, but this one had me hooked! brilliant!

Oh, my God! That was so...I want to say scary, but that's not quite it. Sad, I guess? Disturbing. Whatever it was, it was great!
I really liked this story, because of the way it made me feel. You know, sad and disturbed and all, all at once. It was great how you wrote the characters so well that I could really see them, and I even almost felt bad for the guy. Especially because of the ending. I don't know, maybe I should hate him, but for some reason I just can't. I don't know, it's not like I'm sticking up for him or anything, not at all. I just...don't know. See, I'm thinking of them as real people, that's how well-written this is!
Yikes, I've written a long, pointless review, so I should probably go. I loved this piece, and you're super talented!