|Reviews for Please Play Game Again|
| indexx 12/23/04 . chapter 1
You know what is great about this... it's both Haiku and poetry! Great poem/haiku!
| WakkoRyan 10/17/04 . chapter 1
Not a chance, indeed.
| Kelpylion 2/5/04 . chapter 1
LOL...well, this isn't the *first* rhyming haiku, because I'm sure I have one or two, but it does indeed rhyme, which adds muchly to the humour. The way you set it, I imagined the cap actually saying those words-maybe in an 'automated cheerful receptionist' voice...and you responding cynically, throwing cap in the garbage. Definitely worthy of laughing-out-loud.
| Pose For Me 1/22/04 . chapter 1
Aw, why not play again? You just might win!. The Summary had me laughing. Hehe. Bottle caps always say "please play game again." Only when I read that do I read the bottle to see what contest is going on. O, i once won a free Coke! *beams*
Yes, yes, I DO write about odd things. I just figured since no one really writes about that sort of stuff, I might as well do it since I don't like going with the flow. I'm the fish in the river who tries to swin upstream, against the current. :)
*salutes you back* Aw, I've never been saluted before. *tear*
| DMK 12/5/03 . chapter 1
A rhyming haiku. Cool, but so short that I feel a little dumb leaving it an actual review. Just wanted to let you know I read it.
| Akura Nishi 11/30/03 . chapter 1
ha ha ha ha!
| Delphian Wyrd 11/21/03 . chapter 1
hahahahahahhahhahahhah pop huh? evilness
| Lellida 11/16/03 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! PURE GENUIS! seriously that was awesome. three lines of pure coolness. Ok I'm done. YAHO! now I'm really done.
| Eckrice 10/31/03 . chapter 1
Um.. I don't get it... I guess it's pretty good... Oh well.
| Namir Swiftpaw 10/20/03 . chapter 1
I like your haiku, but it's not the first rhyming one, lol. ; I wrote one that rhymed (it's the very last haiku of my Nature Haiku Collection) and I know other people have done it before. ;
However! Rhyming haikus are hard to do, and you should be rewarded. *gives you a gold star*
| cindie 10/10/03 . chapter 1
| Chlorinated Pi 10/10/03 . chapter 1
Great idea. That was really funny. Those soda cap games are evil, aren't they?
| The Drunkn Munky 10/9/03 . chapter 1
Thats awsome and true hehe good job.
It ryhmes to it could be a little song.