Reviews for Poems Of Emotion Part 2

Froggie (too lazy to login ... 2003-10-08 ch 1,	this is very eloquent as always, faith. I like it how it is, but if I had to choose, it has the makings of a nice long poem. Try it out, and see what happens. Love always, Sara
Deana Bell 2003-10-08 ch 1,	It's hard to say whether you should leave it or make it longer...it seems complete standing on its own, but it would also make an awesome song. Anyroad, I love the metaphor and description. The 'ending' line is great. ~God bless~