the more I read the more better it gets, I can totally recocnize myself in this poem, I were a mask because I'm often shy, really like it

I'm honestly sure that I reviewed this. But it looks like I didn't so I proclaim again that this is good, brilliant and appropriate. Mel

Hey vaasco, sorry I haven't talked to you in awhile, so I decided to check out some of your stuff (I haven't been on FP for at least 2 months) I really like this one, I don't know, heh, i guess it reminds me of my life in a weird twisted way, well, as always you gave me a read worth my time, peace out shower boy!
~courtney~

Love it! Keep writing.

Blessed Be,

Andaren x

Nice poem.. I was a little lost at the beginning but it ties together excellent a couple of lines down. That is a feeling a lot of people do get.. ( Oh and btw, mine can be viewed from either aspects, the person getting abused, or the one abusing her. )

I like it :) It's so true . . .

hm... well.. um.. i like this poem!! lolz... at first i thought it was about like the mask that hides the bad part of you, but i guess its not... well, is it?? haha, i am too stupid to understand... but i like it!!


~YuRi

plz r/r my stories too~ :-D

So true. This really conveys the message well. :)

I definitely like it too..
Firstly, the subject matter is very good.. Its somethin a lot of us face, and have no courage to speak about.. Also, even if we have, sometimes it does not come out in a form as eloquent as this..
Loved the rhyming scheme.. I've given up on rhyming poetry in quite a bit and its always refreshing to revisit such poetry..
Interestin lines you have there, some really struck home.. I can't help realize how this speaks the truth in such an uncanny way..
Some pretty rhetorical questions in there that set me really thinking..
Hmm, what else can I say, the flow is good, the balance is present and the structure is rather uniform too..
I can't help realizin how it looks much neater than any of my pieces..
Wonderful thought process in the piece.. The building up of the tension until the end was really good..
The endin was sorta bittersweet in a way..
Good luck in takin off the mask..
I know I haven't succeeded..
Anyway, muchly well done, interestin read, and really thought-provoking..


~Shadafakup